SUBUCNI: A Twisted Tale of Seduction and Submission


Book Two: "A Change in Marlene"
Part 1

Staring at the sky with dampened eyes, Marlene took stock in the profound changes in her life. As she studied the stars and crescent moon fixed upon the vast deep blue vault of the sky, she tried to piece it all together. Just think, many weeks ago, she was an up and coming media executive bent on rising through the ranks. She had her life all planned out: Get rid of all the dead weight at KFTV; make the station Number One in the market; become noticed by the big guns in New York and Los Angeles; garner for herself a plum position with one of the Big Three networks, perhaps start up her own cable TV channel.

But things changed big time that fateful night with an unusual meteor shower. Little did she know that one of those glowing rocks would land near her home, its precious cargo find its way into her house and inside her body. Never would she imagine that it took a reptilian monster from another world to snap her out of a lifetime of repression and denial. That night, as the creature who called himself Lahon took her on an exquisite, unforgettable sexual journey, Marlene Prentice suddenly came alive.
Gone was the heartless woman who, in her professional life, took no prisoners. The old Marlene didn't care whose toes she stepped on, whose life she ruined with one stroke of the pen or a terse "You're fired!" As long as the ratings increased, as long as the profits soared through the roof, all she cared about was her own ambitions.
Even her personal life was run like a business – tightly scheduled and leaving no time for fun or relaxation. In the ten-odd years between school and her career, Marlie never had time for a proper vacation, never went out with the few friends she had. She preferred to spend her off-hours at home, in the secluded quiet of her remote suburban subdivision where no one knew each other and kept to themselves. She never took in a concert, a play, not even a casual dinner out.

But now that all changed...

Lingering out on the rooftop of her new downtown house, Marlene rolled about in her mind those life-altering events. She quit her job at KFTV, sold her suburban house, bought the urban townhouse, then underwent a profound personal makeover. She ditched the severe professional business attire in favor of a more feminine look. No more black and navy suits. From now on it was flowing dresses, playful tops, casual jeans in soft pastels and jewel tones. The abundant dark brown hair, once pulled back into a "schoolmarm" bun, now freely cascaded about her shoulders. Even her makeup, of which she didn't wear much while working, changed from "safe" colors appropriate for business to a more youthful palette. She looked and felt years younger than her thirty winters.

So what was Marlene, currently without a job, up to these days? With her experience TV, and the cut-throat nature of the business, Marlie decided to write an exposé, a telling tome from a former insider's perspective. Guaranteed a best seller and the media attention it generated, the book allowed Marlene a freedom she'd never known. With all this time on her hands, she could devote all her attentions and energy on one thing: Lahon.

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He always came at night, never during the day. Marlene never questioned his daytime whereabouts and really didn't care. All she cared about was the earth-shattering, mind-numbing orgasms he gave her nightly. That and the sheer delight just being with this non-human creature. Sure, she knew their trysts were kept oh-so clandestine; no one must ever find out she was getting it on with an otherworldly monster, especially one of Lahon's appearance.

As Marlene sat at the computer, pounding out the prerequisite next three chapters of her book, a wickedly sexy smile spread across her face. Wouldn't it just frost those guys who spurned her to find out just who her new steady "boyfriend" really was. No, as Lahon said, no one must ever find out; it would be too much for close-minded Earth folks. They would just shoot Lahon dead out of fear and ignorance, and Marlie couldn't take that chance.
Not exactly concentrating on her work, Marlene focused on Lahon, and why she found him so irresistable. Well, the sex was great, fantastic, and she had gotten over the fact that he was not even human. In a way, she found his slinky, sinuous build quite fetching, the golden eyes erotically enticing, the deep voice seductive and manly. Even though he wasn't here, she could feel his presence, the silky smoothness of his glistening black hide, the gentle yet insistent caress of the long pink tongue.

Thinking of him made Marlie very wet, very needy, and extremely horny. For this night, she decided to treat him to a bit of Earth entertainment, something that would surely turn him on in ways unimaginable. After shutting down her computer, Marlene went into the bedroom and changed into a long, shiny, tight-fitting dress of red lamé. She painted her lips with garish "Jungle Red", spritzed on a sexy musky fragrance, piled her abundant hair in a poofy beehive. She selected a steamy jazz CD just right for a night of passion.
Waiting for her lover to arrive, Marlie filled the time doodling at her desk. Jotting down the words "subucni" and "Echyerl", she played around with the letters, shuffling them around until she discovered...

"S-U-B-U-C-N-I...That's 'incubus' spelled backwards. And 'Echyerl' is and anagram of 'lechery'. Hmm...Is Lahon an incubus? And is Echyrel a planet full of oversexed dynamos? I'll have to ask him about that."

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He laughed long and hard when she asked just that. It was well after nine when he arrived, and it surprised Marlie that this worm-lizard beast treated her with the utmost kindness and attention. Over the few months of their affair, she noticed that Lahon was far from evil or crudeness. He was chivalrous, attentive, tender and caring. After that initial coupling, Marlene knew Lahon was no "Wham bam, thank you, ma'am." But something about him puzzled her, which was why she had to ask.
Well, she did that play with words, coming up with "incubus" after spelling subucni backwards. And Echeryl?
"OK," she said with a laugh, "so I had some time on my hands. I just anagramed 'Echeryl' and came up with 'lechery'. But, even though you do have an insatiable appetite..."

Lahon fell out on the floor emitting that deep sexy belly laugh that turned on Marlie so much. He writhed about sexily, the midnight black scales glistening in the faint candlelight. Honestly, thought Marlene with a libidinous delight, he's so...automatic. All he thinks about is sex, right down to his moves and words. Every move he makes suggests sex...So, is Echeryl populated with overly lustful creatures who can't think of anything else other than getting laid?

He laughed again, this time answering her many questions. "As I said, on Echeryl, we are all male. There are no female subucni, so we have to seek out mates from other worlds. I have a penchant for human females. As I told you, there were others before you, alas they were not what I wanted as a life mate."
"And," asked Marlene, snuggling closer to Lahon, marveling at his perfectly shaped reptilian body and the way it gleamed in all the right places, "what is your ideal life mate?"
He pulled her closer, wrapping her within his coils. Gently yet deliberately lustfully licking her face, Lahon replied, "I seek a woman who possesses what I deem important: Beauty, intelligence, talent, compassion, and of course an...How should I put this...overactive sex drive. That woman is you, Marlene."
His coils embracing her tightly, Lahon kissed her deeply, passionately, his long pink tongue hungrily probing the inside of her mouth. He then caressed her hair, face, shoulders, rocking her within his coils.
"Mmm," murmured Marlene, "you sure know how to turn a girl on. Keep that up; it feels great."

She embraced the monster, caressing his buttery smooth hide, her own hazel eyes meeting his golden.
"But what you are, a subucni. That's still incubus spelled backwards." She explained that an incubus is, "An evil spirit that seduces a woman while she is sleeping. It is said the demon possesses the woman, sometimes impregnating her. She will have the child, but she dies in the end."
Lahon sighed, replying, "That is not what we are, Marlene. We Echyerlians do not inflict harm on our mates. We honor them, just as I honor you. As you've come to know me better, you've realized I am not evil nor intend to possess you. Well, I do possess you, sexually, but I do not 'own' you. You are free to pursue your life's goals, however you are not free to pursue another mate."
Marlene kissed him, saying, "Well, I do have my life, and it's gotten better because of you. I want no other mate, no human male for me. I have all I want here, right now."

That said, Marlene began to give Lahon what he craved. Gently loosening her body from his scaly grip, she began her dance, a lap dance actually. Clad in that skintight red lamé dress, Marlene shimmied and slithered all over Lahon's reptilian body, enjoying the contact of her own ivory skin against his smooth black hide. She swiveled and wheeled her hips, pressing her pelvis up against him in steady rhythm. Now, raising herself to a sitting position, Marlie straddled her master, bumping and grinding all the while. Her breasts bobbed in time to the funky beat of the music. She loosened her hair, causing it to tumble about her shoulders like a midnight waterfall. Reaching behind, Marlene slowly and insolently unzipped her dress, wriggling out of it to reveal her magnificently curvaceous body. And that body was clad in the tiniest red satin bikini panties, the breasts barely contained in a matching strapless push-up bra.

She continued the seductive dance, writhing and squirming her body with primeval abandon. Lahon, partially shocked at this sudden spontaneity, responded in kind. Still sprawled under Marlene, still trapped between her toned thighs, the Echerylian monster slinked and twisted his scaly serpentine body, moaning and growling with enjoyment.

Marlene, now overcome with amusement at her antics, and how aroused Lahon became in the process, couldn't help herself. She instantly threw herself over the alien's sinuous, scaly body, covering him with sweet kisses and caresses. Her hands stroked the silky smooth skin, her tongue entwining with his. She especially enjoyed the sensation of Lahon's slinky movements under her. Come on, she thought with a chuckle, he's not even human, even repulsive by many standards, to any other ordinary woman. But why did she feel he was the most beautiful, handsomest, sexiest thing she'd ever seen? Perhaps she needed this, a chance to makeover her life totally. And he gave back her life tenfold.

Thinking about how Lahon totally transformed her life, Marlene suddenly began to cry. Still clutching the beast, still caressing him, she sobbed quietly, letting the tears fall onto his ebony hide. The creature from Echeryl was quite perturbed but not angry. Instead he asked with concern, "Why is my lady sad? Marlene, my love, what is wrong?"
Marlie wiped her swollen eyes, replying, "Nothing is wrong, Lahon. It's just that so much has happened since you came into my life. I don't know what I would've done if you hadn't squirmed your way – no pun intended – into my body, making me feel things I thought I buried long ago. I was so empty before you came along. It was all work and no pleasure. I never took the time to enjoy life. Now, look at me. I'm free from job pressures, no more blind ambition sucking the very life out of me. I have a new home, a promising book deal, I go out more. I just enjoy life to the fullest, and I have you to thank."

Lahon, taking pity upon his beloved, tenderly kissed Marlene, allowing his tongue to trace the outlines of her mouth.
"Marlene, what you said was so sweetly and earnestly expressed. Of course your life has changed, and for the better. But don't give me all the credit. It is you who ultimately decided to alter your life, reorder your priorities. What you have done within these short months only proves your inner drive to become more than you were. And I love you more for it."

Marlene, deeply touched by Lahon's earnest confession of love, leaned forward and kissed him full on the mouth. It was a long, lingering, sweet kiss that took the Echyerlian monster's breath away. He responded with enfolding his lover within his ebony coils. Gently rocking her, he caressed her breasts, face, shoulders with a tenderness that made Marlene shiver with desire. This was no "wham bam"; this was deep love the pair expressed for each other.
There couldn't have been a more incongruous couple. He a reptilian being from another world, she an average Earth woman whose life up until now had been orchestrated by others. Within those few fleeting months, Marlene forgot all she knew, all she was taught about the world and how to get ahead in life. Gone was the robotic creature who arranged her life to please her family – hard work, no time for pleasure, developing along the way a hardened attitude towards those 'weak' and ineffective. Marlene, since becoming Lahon's lover, became more compassionate, more free in her attitudes and beliefs. She discovered the woman within and celebrated her newfound sexuality with gusto.

Now, within the coils of her lover, Marlie gave herself totally to Lahon. She surely loved this creature with all her body, heart, mind, and spirit. Working her way down, she kissed and caressed him, enjoying the feel of the creature's slinky movements and smooth skin. He in turn hardened at once, his massive penis unsheathed from its scaly foreskin surged forth, insistent for entrance.
Marlene shocked yet delighted Lahon by taking him fully in her mouth. Gently and tenderly she worked her tongue up and down the swollen shaft, moaning her pleasure. Lahon responded with subtle writhing, murmuring low in the throat. This woman was all he ever dreamed of and more. Yes, perhaps it is time to take her back to Echyerl, make her his for life. A woman of Marlene's talents would certainly be an asset to his world, and he would make sure she would be exalted above all women.

She released him before he came, preferring him to climax within her. He entered her gently, thrusting and rocking in steady rhythm. His tongue caressed her, wrapping around her breasts, licking her hardened nipples. She moaned and murmured his name over and over, saying how much she loved him.
Still locked within her thighs, still firmly inside her body, Lahon elevated himself, taking Marlene on an unforgettable ride of love.

"Oh," she whispered breathlessly, "I'm floating!"
He hissed in her ear, "Yes, my darling. On Echyerl we call this 'Love in Leviation'. Relax. Let the feeling take you up, up..."

The room seemed to melt away, dissolve into a star-spangled sea of midnight blue. Even the air smelled different: heady, sweet, intensely floral. He was still thrusting deep inside her, filling her with his enormous member, covering her with endless caresses and kisses. Marlene let herself go, opened her body and soul to Lahon's intense lovemaking. They floated effortlessly in space, without shame or thought of the world outside. Within the walls of the elegant townhouse, Lahon and Marlene reveled in their love, each giving and taking fully.
What seemed like an eternity, they floated, still entwined together. Lahon's thrusting became more direct, more urgent. Marlene moaned and squirmed as she rode the massive beast, delighting in the way those barbs on his penis stroked and coaxed her swollen, saturated walls. Like a vibrator, those barbs tickled the most tender parts of her vagina, actually touched the opening of her womb. Never had Marlie felt so needed, so loved. Sexual contentment freed her, made her feel things she never felt before. In her mind, she wondered if it would last forever. Well, he did promise she was his for life, and on Echyerl, everyone lives forever and never grows old...

Lahon tensed, sensing his impending orgasm. With a mighty buck of his body, he thrusted even deeper, faster, causing Marlene to buck and writhe on top of him. She kissed him all over, screamed his name and her enjoyment in exultation. She felt her own climax spiraling, her vaginal muscles contracting and throbbing as they clamped even harder around Lahon's surging penis. She felt him dance and throb deep within, causing her to climax at once.
Still floating in midair, the lovers writhed and bucked in the throes of orgasm. Lahon growled in ecstasy as his seed finally erupted, shooting a full load deep inside, saturating her vaginal tissues. Marlene purred her enjoyment and nearly cried when he withdrew.

Embracing her tightly within his coils, Lahon kissed Marlene fully on the mouth, and as always, breathed into her a sweetly scented fragrance.

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Morning light filtered softly through the blinds. Marlene stirred herself awake, thoroughly sated from last night's lovemaking.
Soft chamber music wafted from the CD player as Marlene lolled in bed. It broke her heart that Lahon had to leave every night after they made love. She always fell asleep soon after, filled with her lover's sweet breath that made her very drowsy yet gave her the most beautiful dreams.
She stretched, allowing the sounds of piano and cello envelope her, to take her back to that paradise. Not looking, she reached out to the space next to her, surprised to find her hand running up and down smooth scaly skin. Lahon!

Marlene, totally taken aback yet extremely overjoyed, leaned over to her sleeping lover. She whispered, "Lahon, you stayed the night. You've never done that before."
He stirred, stretching and wriggling his long snakelike ebony body. Without opening his eyes, he replied, "Marlene, my love. It is true I stayed for you, as you deserve a lover who does not, as you say, 'Wham bam'. No, that is not my nature. I shall remain in your bed, my dear. Now, let me sleep."
She was puzzled. "But don't you want something to eat? I can whip up breakfast for both of us. I have to run an errand this morning, so I can pick up something wonderful from the bakery downtown. What would you like?"
He drowsily replied, "I need no sustanance. All my nourishment comes from loving you."
Laughing, she said, "Aww, that is so sweet. But don't you want anything? Some water?"
"That would be most welcome."
She kissed him tenderly, saying, "Well, I'll be extra quiet as I get dressed. When I return, I'll have a surprise for you."
"A surprise?"
"Yeah, something I've been meaning to do for a long time. All I have to do is go pick up a few things."
"Such as..."
"You'll see, Lahon. I hope you'll like it."

Saying nothing, Lahon gently caressed Marlene with his tongue, smiled at her, then drifted off to sleep.

"Stay here and get your rest, Lahon. I'll be back soon. I love you."

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It was a quick trip. No hassles, no worries. Marlene, now returning from her errand, lugged the big thing from the car's trunk then up the backsteps of the townhouse. She hoped she remembered most of her childhood lessons. Too bad Daddy and Aunt Ellen had to make her quit just when she was getting so good. And she hoped Lahon would be pleased that she took a renewed interest in a pursuit she once thought at nonsense.
"All I need is to practice. It should come back to to me since I haven't played the thing since...How long has it been? Since high school?"

Just a few steps from the door, she set down her treasure. Without looking up, she sifted through her keys, humming a few bars of a favorite symphony. A familiar voice called out to her.
"I wondered when I'd get to see you again. Honestly, Marlene. Do I need an invitation to visit my own daughter?"

Marlene Prentice looked up to see the one person she came to despise. For what it is was worth, she didn't care if she never saw him again. She didn't need him now...
Oh my God! Lahon is still in the house! What am I going to do?

"Er...Daddy, it's not a good time for a visit. You see, I got tons of stuff to do...You know, finish four chapters for my publisher..."
"Never mind the excuses, young lady. I want to know who he is."
"Who...?"
"The guy who made you quit your job. I want to meet him – Now!"

To be continued...Go to Part 2

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